Anthem for a Doomed Youth - Revision history

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 Out of the ground we crawl like ants<br />
 The foeman takes his aim<br />
-Cut down as the grass of the field, I will die<br />
+Cut down like the grass of the field, I will die<br />
 In the mud from whence I came

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-When the call came out I answered strong<br />
+The call came out and I answered strong<br />
 For Patria rose I up<br />
 I knew not what she would demand<br />
 When I partook of this trembling cup
-When my bounden duty was I taught to do<br />
+My bounden duty was I taught to do<br />
-They bestowed on me a helm<br />
+And accoutred with a helm<br />
 The rifle's crucifer was I sent forth<br />
 Into the killing realm

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 When my bounden duty was I taught to do<br />
-They bestowed on me a helm
+They bestowed on me a helm<br />
 The rifle's crucifer was I sent forth<br />
 Into the killing realm
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 Out of the ground we crawl like ants<br />
 The foeman takes his aim<br />
-Struck down by the power of this world, I will die<br />
+Cut down as the grass of the field, I will die<br />
 In the mud from whence I came

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 When I partook of this trembling cup
-They bestowed on me the tools of war<br />
+When my bounden duty was I taught to do<br />
-A machine gun and a helm<br />
+They bestowed on me a helm
-In clothen armour they sent me forth<br />
+The rifle's crucifer was I sent forth<br />
 Into the killing realm
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 I've been hit, but I keep on wading through this pit<br />
 Cage<br />
-I've been caught, watching helplessly as my friends get shot<br />
+I've been caught, watching helpless as my friends get shot<br />
 Dragged<br />
 Far away to the darkest parts of society<br />
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 Like sheep, around here human life is cheap
-Over the top we crawl like ants<br />
+Out of the ground we crawl like ants<br />
 The foeman takes his aim<br />
 Struck down by the power of this world, I will die<br />

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 Into the killing realm
-When with the foe we fought and killed<br />
+When with the foe we fought and slew<br />
 We communed there in the mud<br />
 Our bodies were the Eucharist<br />

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 Pain<br />
-I've been hit, but I keep on wading through this<br />
+I've been hit, but I keep on wading through this shit<br />
 Cage<br />
 I've been caught, watching helplessly as my friends get shot<br />