Commander Toad - Revision history

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2014-09-04T04:29:08Z

‎Verse 3

2012-05-28T20:44:49Z

‎Verse 2

2012-05-28T20:44:30Z

‎Verse 3

2012-05-26T17:19:13Z

‎Verse 1

2012-05-15T17:28:19Z

2012-05-07T21:09:59Z

‎Verse 3

2012-05-07T07:11:38Z

‎Verse 3

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‎Verse 4

2012-05-07T04:35:09Z

‎Verse 3

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 No planet is there where he is unknown<br />
 His image shines upon the vaulting firmament<br />
-His name is writ in Earth's foundation stone<br />
+His name is writ in its foundation stone<br />
 The primal secrets whispered by the Old Ones<br />

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 He stands apart, unequalled, bright and brave<br />
 Forever sworn to plumb arcane expanses<br />
-The primal depths beneath galactic waves<br />
+Primordial depths beneath galactic waves<br />
 An ancient traveler he, for hidden ages<br />

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 No planet is there where he is unknown<br />
 His image shines upon the vaulting firmament<br />
-His name is writ in its foundation stone<br />
+His name is writ in Earth's foundation stone<br />
-Primordial secrets whispered by the Old Ones<br />
+The primal secrets whispered by the Old Ones<br />
 Commander Toad has known these mysteries<br />
 For he was there before the word was uttered<br />

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 Its emerald sheen reflects a thousand suns<br />
 So quietly it flies, as out the portholes<br />
-Uncounted worlds winking off and on<br />
+Uncounted worlds are winking off and on<br />
 ===Verse 2===

← Older revision		Revision as of 17:28, 15 May 2012
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	Who saw the deep, Who climbed the highest heaven<br />		Who saw the deep, Who climbed the highest heaven<br />
	Surpassing all the kings of mortal man<br />		Surpassing all the kings of mortal man<br />
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 ===Verse 4===
 The universe's span he saw established<br />
 Before the gods had yet created aught<br />
 Commander Toad, O may he live forever!<br />

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 The prophecies primordial of the Old Ones<br />
 Commander Toad has known these mysteries<br />
-For he was there before their words were uttered<br />
+For he was there before the word was uttered<br />
 Before the darkness brought forth deities<br />

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 ===Verse 3===
 Commander Toad has crossed the gaping cosmos<br />
 No planet is there where he is unknown<br />
-His image shines upon the constellations<br />
+His image shines upon creation's vaulting<br />
-His name is writ in earth's foundation stone<br />
+His name is writ in its foundation stone<br />
 ===Verse 4===
-Commander Toad was there
+The universe's span he saw established<br />
-Before the stars were thrown into the sky
+Before the gods had yet created aught<br />
+Commander Toad, and who will speak of his birth?<br />
-The likes of which the gods cannot descry
+The bounds of time and space had not been wrought<br />
 Commander Toad, O may he live forever!<br />