New Life - Revision history

173.206.101.83: /* Chorus 2 */

2014-04-23T06:22:34Z

‎Chorus 2

2014-04-21T05:58:33Z

‎Verse 1

2014-04-21T04:54:53Z

‎Chorus 2

2014-04-21T04:53:50Z

‎Verse 3

2014-04-21T04:51:10Z

2014-04-21T04:50:26Z

2014-04-21T04:50:08Z

‎Verse 2?

2014-04-21T04:49:53Z

2014-04-20T17:34:11Z

2014-04-20T17:14:53Z

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 Has been leading up to now, to this moment of epiphany<br />
 I'll walk this road, and reach my destination<br />
-To look on her in glory, Oh Beatrice, you're waitin'<br />
+To look on her in glory, oh Beatrice, you're waitin'<br />
 When all I've known before is just my feeble imitation<br />
 Of the way her beauty shone to enlighten every nation<br />
 And until then, I'll keep on trying to sing the song that I thought I once could hear her play<br />
 And my new life has begun today<br />

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 My self-control went only so far
-All I wanted was for her to say hi to me<br />
+All I wanted was for her to wave<br />
 And smile as we passed in the street<br />
 There wasn't anything else in heaven or earth<br />

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 I'll walk this road, and reach my destination<br />
 To look on her in glory, Oh Beatrice, you're waitin'<br />
-When all I've known before is just my imitation<br />
+When all I've known before is just my feeble imitation<br />
 Of the way her beauty shone to enlighten every nation<br />
 And until then, I'll keep on trying to sing the song that I thought I once could hear her play<br />
 And my new life has begun today<br />

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 And I'm never gonna see her again<br />
 But that's OK, I've had my vision<br />
-My new life isn't over yet
+And my new life isn't over yet
 ===Chorus 2===

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 Has been leading up to now, to this moment of epiphany<br />
 I'll walk this road, and reach my destination<br />
-To look on her in glory, Oh Beatrice, you're waitin'
+To look on her in glory, Oh Beatrice, you're waitin'<br />
-When all I've known before is just my feeble imitation<br />
+When all I've known before is just my imitation<br />
 Of the way her beauty shone to enlighten every nation<br />
 And until then, I'll keep on trying to sing the song that I thought I once could hear her play<br />
 And my new life has begun today<br />

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 And my new life has begun today
-===Verse 2?===
+===Verse 2===
 I remember how her lovely eyes would shine<br />

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 ===Verse 1===
-When I saw her, I knew at once<br />
+When I saw her for the very first time<br />
-She was way beyond my
+I felt a new love take a hold of my heart<br />
-All I wanted, was for her to wave<br />
+All I wanted was for her to say hi to me<br />
-And smile at me in the street<br />
+And smile as we passed in the street<br />
-I could not imagine anything more<br />
+There wasn't anything else in heaven or earth<br />
-To make my happiness more complete
+That would make my happiness complete
 ===Chorus===
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 Now I've seen the light, a brand new way<br />
 And my new life has begun today
 ===Verse 3===
 And now she's gone away, she'll never come back<br />
 And I'm never gonna see her again<br />
 But that's OK, I've had my vision<br />
-And my new life isn't over yet
+My new life isn't over yet
-===Chorus===
+===Chorus 2===
 And I realize that all my life<br />
 Has been leading up to now, to this moment of epiphany<br />
 I'll walk this road, and reach my destination<br />
-To look on her in glory, in the sight of every nation
+To look on her in glory, Oh Beatrice, you're waitin'
 When all I've known before is just my feeble imitation<br />
 And until then, I'll keep on trying to sing the song that I thought I once could hear her play<br />
 And my new life has begun today<br />